Mrs Shaw gave us the book The Stick man to listen to and our task was to make a stick figure name him or her stick... Mine is called Jerry. Stick Jerry is a pig hunter. He has a stick dog called Bob that is his pig hunting dog.
I like your background James. What is the story behind stickman Jerry? I think it is a bush adventure. I can see another character. Who is that and how do they fit into the story?
Hi James Your background looks like the right sort of environment to spot a gnarly wild pig. I wonder what breed of dog Bob the pig hunting dog is? Mr Bennett has a pig dog called Boo who is getting very old and deaf, I'm not sure he would manage to hear a pig in the bush anymore. Did you insert rectangular shapes to create your stick man or did you use a drawing tool? Mrs Bennett
Hi James Your background looks like the right kind of place to find a pig. I like that you added the stick dog as well as a stick hunter to your picture. Clever use of the rectangle shape James. Mrs Bayley rs Bayley
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I like your background James. What is the story behind stickman Jerry? I think it is a bush adventure. I can see another character. Who is that and how do they fit into the story?
ReplyDeleteStick Jerry is a pig hunter. He has a stick dog called Bob that is his pig huntting dog.
DeleteHi James
ReplyDeleteYour background looks like the right sort of environment to spot a gnarly wild pig. I wonder what breed of dog Bob the pig hunting dog is?
Mr Bennett has a pig dog called Boo who is getting very old and deaf, I'm not sure he would manage to hear a pig in the bush anymore.
Did you insert rectangular shapes to create your stick man or did you use a drawing tool?
Mrs Bennett
The stick dog is a pitball huntterway huscky cross. I used rectangular shapes.
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ReplyDeleteHi James
ReplyDeleteYour background looks like the right kind of place to find a pig. I like that you added the stick dog as well as a stick hunter to your picture. Clever use of the rectangle shape James.
Mrs Bayley
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