Monday, 1 July 2019

We copped some sentences and words to write our own stores.
The hungry killer moves in. Down the narrow burrow. 
The mice run around like chickens with no head,while the taipan reels in its  prey. Suddenly it launches forward to inject its lethal medicine. Repeatedly striking. One by one knocking them off. What used to be a peaceful home is now a murder scene. The taipan’s glossy scales slither over the remains.
   

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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous22 July 2019 at 12:10

    Hi James,
    Nice work, this really represents you. Nice descriptive words!
    Once again great work James

    -Liana

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